2010高考英语作文

『壹』 2010高考英语作文评分标准

2010高考英语高考作文评分标准
1. 本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2. 评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次 的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3. 词数少于 80和多于 120的，从总分中减去2分。
4. 评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影 响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
7. 内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 覆盖所有内容要点。
3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6. 达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2. 虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3. 应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5. 应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6. 整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5. 较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6. 信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成试题规定的任务。
2. 明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3. 语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4. 较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5. 缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6. 信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：（0分）
未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

2009年高考英语评分细则

第一档是极优档，30分。标准为：书写规范；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；词汇丰富，有修辞意识。

第二档是优秀，26分至29分。标准为：紧扣主题；覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，显示出较强的语言运动能力；语言小错不超过4个。

第三档是良好，22 分至25分。标准为：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，语言有少量错误，但基本不影响意思表达。

第四档是一般，18分至21分。标准为：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，能够表达基本内容；语言错误已影响了部分意思的表达，但多数句子基本正确。

第五档是较差，13分至17分。标准为：内容不完成，要点不全，行文不连贯，语言错误较多，多数句子基本正确。

第六档是差，6分至12分。标准为：内容混乱或主要内容偏离主题，能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。

第七档是极差，0分至5分。只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章或只写出与作文无关的内容。

评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线。根据百分制计算，英语作文的及格线是18分。

『贰』 2010高考英语作文

2010高考英语作文范文：国庆60周年
新中国成立60周年来，我国发生了翻天覆地的变化，请你据此写一篇120字的英语作文，谈谈自己的感想。

要求:

1. 列出生活中反映一两件家乡变化的事, 如购新车、住新房等。

2. 列出最近发生的一两件国家大事，如成功举办奥运、“神舟七号” 顺利升空等。

3. 要表达出你的喜悦和自豪之情，并谈谈你的感想。

Great changes have taken place since our country was founded 60 years ago. In the past we lived in the small and old houses and now we move into new broad ones which are more than one hundred square meters. At the same time, many families have own their new cars.

Besides, our country hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully in 2008 and we took the first place in winning gold medals. Another inspiring event was that the Shenzhou Ⅶ was sent into space smoothly, which shows our scientific research get great achievements.

We are very happy and proud of all these achievements. I am sure our country will become even stronger and richer. I love our motherland very much. Let’s work hard to make contribution to our country in the future.

2010高考英语作文范文：甲型流感
甲型流感：(1)
假如你是李华，你学校内有人得了猪流感，正在接受治疗，你校学生非常害怕，请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感?
1. 平时外出戴口罩，少去人群集中的公共场所, 避免接触病人等。
2. 勤洗手，保证充足睡眠，多锻炼多运动等。
3. 词数: 120字左右
4. 文章的开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
参考词汇: 猪流感swine flu; 口罩 face mask.
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it? ____________________________________________________
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?
We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.
We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.

甲型流感：(2)
不同人都有着不同的习惯，个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求，写一篇120字的英语短文，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
1. 介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。
2. 习惯与卫生的关系：习惯是卫生基础; 不好的习惯，会导致一些传染疾病传播，如AIDS，SARS， H1N1流感等。
3. 你的看法……。
It is generally believed that different people have different habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.
It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can’t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like
AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.
Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.

2010高考英语作文范文：上海世博会
2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动，志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子阅读、算术，或打扫公园与街道，或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others’ help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What’s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.

In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

2010高考英语作文范文：金融危机下大学生就业
当今我国大学生就业成功率很低，除了全球性的金融危机影响外，还有就是大学生对工作的选择。有的人认为应该优先选择自己喜欢的工作，而不是自己擅长的;另一部分人相反。你班学生就此事进行讨论，请客观地介绍情况并谈谈你的看法。
观点 理由
一部分人 喜欢比擅长重要。 兴趣是最好的老师，精通与擅长的可能性会大大增加等。
另一部分 擅长比喜欢重要。 擅长更容易成功，后天努力培养兴趣。
你 …………
注意：1. 短文须包括所有要点, 可适度发挥。
2. 开头已为你写好, 但不计人总词数。
3. 词数:120左右。
Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?___________________________________________
Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?
Some agree that the love of job is very important because interest is the best teacher. People are often willing to do what they like doing. If you are not good at it in the beginning, you can work hard and graally improve your skills to make you good at it. Others hold their view that if you are good at it, you have more chances to achieve success very soon. While you work, you can do all you can to gain the interest in it little by little.
From my point of view, I think we should make full use of our strengths to change them each other regardless of the fact that you like it or you are good at it.

2010高考英语作文范文：“快乐女声” 等选秀热
2009年 “快乐女声” 的火爆已无需渲染。你对此现象进行简单的调查，结果如下: 有些人认为 “平民平等参与，有机会一夜成名等”。也有些人认为 “快女” 中还存在一些不尽人意的地方, 如 “浪费时间和精力，影响学习，产生一夜成名的不良志向 (bad ambition) 等”。请根据以上情况为 “无为论坛” 写一篇报告并发表自己的观点。
注意: 1. 包括以上全部要点可适当 发挥，使上下文连贯。
2. 词数: 100-120。
3. 文章的格式和开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
To: Wuwei Forum
From : Li Hua
Date: June 20, 2009
Subject: Super Girl
Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing. We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently.
_________________________________________________.
To: Wuwei Forum
From : Li Hua
Date: June 20, 2009
Subject: Super Girl
Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing. We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently.
There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say Super Girl is their favorite. They hold their view that Super Girl can offer a stage for ordinary people to take part in it equally and have the chance of becoming famous overnight. While others think that Super Girl makes the girls waste time and energy so that it can have some bad effects on their study. In addition, it can cause some teenagers to have bad ambition about becoming famous overnight.
From my point of view, it is wrong of young people to admire Super Girl too much, because they may mislead young people. I think to learn more and work hard is the real way to success.

2010高考英语作文范文：低碳经济下的环境保护
低碳经济下的环境保护(1)

“低碳经济”是一个具有广泛社会性的经济前沿理念，最早是在2003年英国政府发布的能源白皮书《我们能源的未来：创建低碳经济》正式提出的。低碳经济包括低碳发展、低碳产业、低碳技术和低碳生活等经济形态，是指在不影响经济发展的前提下，通过技术创新和制度创新，降低能源和资源消耗，尽可能最大限度地减少温室气体和污染物的排放，实现减缓气候变化的目标，促进人类的可持续发展。

Protection of Environment

1. 目前环保还存在着许多问题。

2. 为了保护环境，

3. 各国政府做了大量的工作。

4. 我的看法。

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people’s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through ecation. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

低碳经济下的环境保护(2)

根据题目《师父被熏晕过去了》的漫画和下面要求写一篇关于河水污染的感想。

1. 情况。2. 原因。3. 后果。4. 措施。

词数 100~120。

One day Sun Wukong together with his master and brothers was walking across a river. Suddenly his master fell off the horse by the bad smell of river water. They found the water so dirty that they could hardly breathe.

A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted. In this way most of the fish in the river were killed. If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water. Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution. We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.

低碳经济下的环境保护(3)
全世界的环境问题在变得越来越严重。请你根据漫画内容和下面要求给China Daily写一封信反映这一情况，并提出保护环境的建议。
注意：1.信的开头与结尾已经给出，不计算在总词数内。
2. 字数要求: 120左右。
人口膨胀population expansion;过度开发overdevelopment。
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
_________________________________________________________
Yours truly
Li Hua
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
With the development of instry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man’s existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.
Yours truly
Li Hua

『叁』 2010上海高考英语作文范文

高考英语高考作文评分标准
1.
本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。
2.
评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次
的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。
3.
词数少于
80和多于
120的，从总分中减去2分。
4.
评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5.
拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影
响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写汉词汇用法均可接受。
6.
如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次。
7.
内容要点可用不同方式表达，对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。
【各档次的给分范围和要求】
第五档(很好)；(21-25分)
1.
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.
覆盖所有内容要点。
3.
应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。
4.
语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。
5.
有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档(好)：(16-20分)
1.
完全完成了试题规定的任务。
2.
虽漏掉1、2个次重点，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.
语法结构或词汇方面应用基本准确，些许错误主要是因尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致。
5.
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。
6.
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档(适当)：(11-15分)
1.
基本完成了试题规定的任务。
2.
虽漏掉一些内容，但覆盖所有主要内容。
3.
应用的语法结构和词汇能满足任务的要求。
4.
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。
5.
应用简单的语句间的连接成分，使全文内容连贯。
6.
整体而言，基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(较差)：(6-10分)
1.
未恰当完成试题规定的任务。
2.
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容，写了一些无关内容。
3.
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.
有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响了对写作内容的理解。
5.
较少使用语句间的连接成分，内容缺少连贯性。
6.
信息未能清楚地传达给读者。
第一档(差)：(1-5分)
1.
未完成试题规定的任务。
2.
明显遗漏主要内容，写了一些无关内容，原因可能是未理解试题要求。
3.
语法结构单调、词汇项目有限。
4.
较多语法结构或词汇方面的错误，影响对写作内容的理解。
5.
缺乏语句间的连接成分，内容不连贯。
6.
信息未能传达给读者。
不得分：（0分）
未能传达给读者仟何信息：内容太少，无法评判；写的内容均与所要求内容无关或所写内容无法看清。

『肆』 天津2010高考英语作文

Application letter
Dear all,
I would like to introce myself in brief as follows,
I'm a dedicated student and intersted in taking part in all kinds of activities especially asisstance activity.I hope that school teachers and headmaster could allow me to asisst poor district and attrbute myself.
Fistly, asisstance is a tranditional vitue in our country.we could become colser with each other.Secondly, the society will be humous of peace and I can get more actual practice in English.Not only helped to others ,but also practise myself.
There are my plan for asisstance:
It is realistic for them to get more substance asisstance,such as ,books,tapescrip,computer and so on.We can raise some money for them,solving thier daily life and learning.Then ,they could be get much energy to study at normal position.I hope you can allow me to take part in this activity and be assigned to asisst them.

『伍』 2010高考英语作文范文

天津卷
Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.

Welcome to this year’s English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.

I hope that the English speech competition will be a great success!

Thank you!

【思路分析】

这是一篇很实用的演讲稿。旨在考查学生在实际生活中在某个具体场合下灵活使用英文来表达自己思想的能力。考查学生学以致用。本演讲稿有三个写作要点：1. 说明比赛的意义，如提高英语听说能力，养成读书的习惯等；2. 说明比赛的注意事项，如每人演讲不超过5分钟，语言流利，发音准确等；3. 预祝比赛圆满成功。然后自由发挥写出适当的结尾。

【较高级的结构和短语】form/develop a good habit of doing…; take part in; The first thing we can do is to make…; pay attention to 等。

希望你能满意。

『陆』 北京2010高考英语作文

可以准备几篇不同类型的，例如：

一类情景作文：

1、09年高考的外出环保类；
2、10年海淀区一模的图表类说明文

二类开放性作文：

1、家庭与教育类（例：09年北京高考；10年东城二模）
2、成就与梦想类（例：10年西城二模）
3、优点与缺点类（例：10年海淀一模）

不同类的文章词汇群以及句子会有点不同，不过开头结尾分段等都相对固定，可以参考一下：）

加油哈~~~

『柒』 2010年高考英语作文类型

http://wenku..com/view/5f47cdd233d4b14e852468ca.html

『捌』 2010全国高考卷英语作文 范文

全国一卷的：http://shiti.e.sina.com.cn/paper/89/18/31889/account.php?p=12
全国二卷的：one possible version
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some course to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and American Today, and teach of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club our school's English newspaper.
Please tell me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help.
Best,
Li Hua.

『玖』 2010年天津卷高考英语作文范文

从话题角度来看，和往年一样，社会类和教育类仍然是主要考查话题分别占到11次和6次，当然这里社会类的话题包括工作，生活，城市建设等，内容涉及多个层面，这也是数量偏多的一个原因；教育类包含学科教育, 教育方式, 家庭教育, 学校教育等一直是高频话题，科技类和环境类上半年考频正常,犯罪类和政府类考查偏少，各出现了一次。值得注意的是，新闻媒体考题一般出现在上半年，今年考频加大，上半年出现了2次。

重点考题分析

Some people believe famous people’s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While other think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2019/04/13)

4月13日考的这道题是整个上半年构思难度极高的一道题目，也是一道老题，很多有望上6的考生都因为这道题的构思问题，变成5.5分。有些学生对题目的理解有一些偏差，题目的意思是：名人对国际援助组织的捐助使得人们关注到问题，然而另一些人认为名人使得问题不那么重要。第一方面比较好理解，名人利用自身的影响力使得问题得到关注，比如尘肺病对于大众来说不是很常见，是煤矿工人得的一种病，很多明星通过公益活动，让更多的人关注到这部分需要帮助的群体。另一方面，淡化问题的原因是大众或者粉丝只关注名人的行为而忽视问题本身，对问题没有后续跟进，也就最终解决不了问题。

The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to get work and hard for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2019/05/04)

这道题审题很容易跑偏, 很多同学把重心会放在科技让年轻人简单地获得工作,或者错误理解成科技让年轻人的工作简单化,忽视了后半句hard for old people。题目中含有并列关系and，需要两者都要提及，所以后面论证只证明对年轻人的好处是偏面的。

总而言之，上半年题目以老题重现居多，同学们还是要多刷机经，有可能就碰到自己写过的题目，下半年大作文犯罪类，政府类考题可能会增加，可以增加这两类话题的练习。另外，要注意审题常见的坑，乍一看不太懂的题目不妨多读几遍，不要贸然下笔。

『拾』 我要2000~2010年各地高考英语作文及范文

2010年陕西高考英语作文试题 英语作文（满分30分）假定你是李华。你们学校和一所美国中学签署了教师交流协议。在过去的一年里，你们的英文老师是来自这所中学的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美国任教。请你根据写作要点和要求给Sue写封电子邮件。英语作文写作要点：1.对她表达感谢之意; 2.介绍她离开后你自己及班里发生的事情;3.希望了解她的近况。 要求：1.短文须写在答题卡的指定区域。2.短文词数不少于100（不含已写好的部分）。3.内容充实，结构完整，语意连贯。4.书写须清晰、工整。5.邮件中不能体现本人真实信息。Dear Sure,I’m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It’s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.All the bestLi Hua 范文：As we all know ,the world develops more quicker than before. ,Many students use the mobile phone in the school .Now ,let me tell you the advantage and the disadvantage . Many parent thinks use the mobile phone is bad for students .It will must affect students's study.Most students will play the games in class .And they will send the information to their friends .That's too bad to them to study . But ,using the mobile phone also have good things to students ,They can call their friends when they are not in school .It will makes your friendship more close . And ,if your parents can't find you ,they can call you at once . In a word ,using the mobile phone have the good things and the bad things .The important is if you cancontral