英语作文评论
In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.
㈡ 英语作文评语大全
依式行文,文笔来素朴,结构严谨.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
内容源丰富,结构严谨,体系完备,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
简洁流畅,层次井然,结构严谨,文字生动,颇富幽默,笔调轻松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
㈢ 怎么写英文评语
A.单词：
Great!很好／Perfect!完美／Good!棒／Wonderful!好极了／Correct!是的／Excellent!太棒了
B.短语：
Well done!做得好／Neat and tidy!干的漂亮
C.句型：
That's OK! 很好。
What a good job you have done! 做得很棒。
Now you can do better than before. 你还能做得更好。
Your handwriting is excellent! 书写很漂亮。
Keep it up. 继续加油。
Your English will become better if you work harder. 加油，努力之后还能更好。
D.段落：
Although you have not been successful,you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practising your spoken English.
虽然你没有成功，但你做得比以往任何时候都好。成功属于勤奋的学习者。我相信如果你继续练习你的英语口语，你会取得越来越大的进步。
E.格言：
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
Failure is the only highroad to success.失败是成功之母。
(3)英语作文评论扩展阅读
写评语的4个原则
1、针对特点， 实事求是；
2、鼓励为主， 不忘建议；
3、发挥个性， 引发兴趣；
4、用对代词， 拉近距离。
㈣ 英语作文点评，请高人指点
没有太大的问题，句子基本都把意思表达出来了
但是可能时态不是很清楚，过去时间段里又掺带了一般现在时，这个要改一下。
有一些词看起来像是你直接查的字典就写上去的，不是很恰当，用之前最好多看一下例句，模仿例句其实没什么坏处
有两句话我画了很长的线，实话讲不是正确的句子，一个句好里面用逗号连接了好几个完整的句子。要是先让句子看起来很高级就好好用从句，用不好不如直接写成正确的短句。写东西首先要是能表达清楚意思再是读起来好听
我试着尽量不改你的原词，修改了前几段，你可以参考一下。
㈤ 关于英语作文的点评，100字左右的英语点评即可
Michael Jackson's death, I am very sorry. I believe that many people like him, will. But like you said, because he is a shining star. His case will affect many people. I believe that many years later, when people mention the name Michael Jackson, he will become a much-told story.
㈥ 英语作文请求点评
以下是你的错误：
1. (starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正确：started
2. And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正确：programmes
3. I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正确：troubles
4. I (believed) it will come true.
正确：believe
5. I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建议：In the process of learning English, I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.
6. They are helpful.
建议：They are indeed helpful to me.
7. Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建议: of course, I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.
8. For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建议：For example, I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.
9. I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建议: I wish I could master this language in the future.
㈦ 英语作文评价大全
说真的，我很讨厌淅沥的小雨，它们是那么的缠绵，总会使心烦涌入心头，惊涛拍浪，挖心的难受．因此在这样的雨天我没有在雨中漫步的情怀．但在北方由于在黄河以北降雨量少，注定淅沥的小雨会是夏天的常客．于是我也有些厌恶夏天，好在夏天还有一位代言人——暴雨，使我对夏天有了一丝的眷恋．
我喜欢暴雨有种近似痴迷的程度，因为暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，给人一种亲切感．下暴雨时我喜欢将窗子开到最大，将手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨点落下时针扎般的痛，那时却感觉不到疼，有的只是毅力的考验．张大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一种久违的香气，它会使我想起曾今那充满鸟语花香的大自然．
今天又一场暴雨过后，我遥望天际发现天空是那么美，头顶的一片天是那么的湛蓝，蓝的没有一丝杂质，它又是那么的飘渺，好像是七仙女抛下的一件蓝色的薄纱在空中飘舞．不远处还是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黄色，那种颜色给人一种压抑的感觉．于是我寻找蓝灰的交界处，那里本应是逐渐的过度色，而大自然却巧妙的嵌进去一朵还未完全舒展的云，刹那间我感受到了活力，那是生命的诠释．突然明白再阴的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出现的那一刹那．
那是一幅美丽的油画，是大自然给予人类的享受，更是自然给我们敲响的警示钟，如果没有人类保护大自然，恐怕以后连那雨过天晴的后的一丝感动也会一去不复返，至少我们会失去对生命的另一种诠释
㈧ 英语作文点评
建议
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被动不合来适自)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有两个谓语动词，there be 和主系表结果冲突。可改为A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名词放feel后不合适)