英語作文評論
In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.
㈡ 英語作文評語大全
依式行文,文筆來素樸,結構嚴謹.
Formational style of writing and strict in structure.
內容源豐富,結構嚴謹,體系完備,博大精深
rich contents,perfect system,broad andprofound meaning,
簡潔流暢,層次井然,結構嚴謹,文字生動,頗富幽默,筆調輕松
Simple and smooth,orderly hierarchy,rigorous structure,vivid characters,quite humorous,delightful
㈢ 怎麼寫英文評語
A.單詞：
Great!很好／Perfect!完美／Good!棒／Wonderful!好極了／Correct!是的／Excellent!太棒了
B.短語：
Well done!做得好／Neat and tidy!乾的漂亮
C.句型：
That's OK! 很好。
What a good job you have done! 做得很棒。
Now you can do better than before. 你還能做得更好。
Your handwriting is excellent! 書寫很漂亮。
Keep it up. 繼續加油。
Your English will become better if you work harder. 加油，努力之後還能更好。
D.段落：
Although you have not been successful,you have done better than ever.Success belongs to the diligent learners.I am sure you will make more and more progress if you keep on practising your spoken English.
雖然你沒有成功，但你做得比以往任何時候都好。成功屬於勤奮的學習者。我相信如果你繼續練習你的英語口語，你會取得越來越大的進步。
E.格言：
Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者事竟成。
Failure is the only highroad to success.失敗是成功之母。
(3)英語作文評論擴展閱讀
寫評語的4個原則
1、針對特點， 實事求是；
2、鼓勵為主， 不忘建議；
3、發揮個性， 引發興趣；
4、用對代詞， 拉近距離。
㈣ 英語作文點評，請高人指點
沒有太大的問題，句子基本都把意思表達出來了
但是可能時態不是很清楚，過去時間段里又摻帶了一般現在時，這個要改一下。
有一些詞看起來像是你直接查的字典就寫上去的，不是很恰當，用之前最好多看一下例句，模仿例句其實沒什麼壞處
有兩句話我畫了很長的線，實話講不是正確的句子，一個句好裡面用逗號連接了好幾個完整的句子。要是先讓句子看起來很高級就好好用從句，用不好不如直接寫成正確的短句。寫東西首先要是能表達清楚意思再是讀起來好聽
我試著盡量不改你的原詞，修改了前幾段，你可以參考一下。
㈤ 關於英語作文的點評，100字左右的英語點評即可
Michael Jackson's death, I am very sorry. I believe that many people like him, will. But like you said, because he is a shining star. His case will affect many people. I believe that many years later, when people mention the name Michael Jackson, he will become a much-told story.
㈥ 英語作文請求點評
以下是你的錯誤：
1. (starded) to learn English in Grade 6
正確：started
2. And now I begin to listen to English radio (programs)
正確：programmes
3. I also have some (trouble) in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
正確：troubles
4. I (believed) it will come true.
正確：believe
5. I also have some trouble in learning English,such as,vocabulary and listening.
建議：In the process of learning English, I met some obstacles such as from the aspects of vocabulary and listening.
6. They are helpful.
建議：They are indeed helpful to me.
7. Of course,I can't avoid making mistakes as others learning English.
建議: of course, I can't avoid making mistakes as learning a foreign language is a really tough for me.
8. For example,I often speak and write the Chinese English.
建議：For example, I often translate Chinese directly into English without considering the grammatical error.
9. I have a dream that I can speak English fluently as a native speaker one day.I believed it will come true.
建議: I wish I could master this language in the future.
㈦ 英語作文評價大全
說真的，我很討厭淅瀝的小雨，它們是那麼的纏綿，總會使心煩湧入心頭，驚濤拍浪，挖心的難受．因此在這樣的雨天我沒有在雨中漫步的情懷．但在北方由於在黃河以北降雨量少，註定淅瀝的小雨會是夏天的常客．於是我也有些厭惡夏天，好在夏天還有一位代言人——暴雨，使我對夏天有了一絲的眷戀．
我喜歡暴雨有種近似痴迷的程度，因為暴雨下出了北方人的豪爽，給人一種親切感．下暴雨時我喜歡將窗子開到最大，將手臂伸出窗外去感受豆大的雨點落下時針扎般的痛，那時卻感覺不到疼，有的只是毅力的考驗．張大嘴努力的呼吸泥土的清香那是一種久違的香氣，它會使我想起曾今那充滿鳥語花香的大自然．
今天又一場暴雨過後，我遙望天際發現天空是那麼美，頭頂的一片天是那麼的湛藍，藍的沒有一絲雜質，它又是那麼的飄渺，好像是七仙女拋下的一件藍色的薄紗在空中飄舞．不遠處還是灰色的，印在房屋上竟是土黃色，那種顏色給人一種壓抑的感覺．於是我尋找藍灰的交界處，那裡本應是逐漸的過度色，而大自然卻巧妙的嵌進去一朵還未完全舒展的雲，剎那間我感受到了活力，那是生命的詮釋．突然明白再陰的天也有晴朗的那一刻，再黑的夜也有黎明出現的那一剎那．
那是一幅美麗的油畫，是大自然給予人類的享受，更是自然給我們敲響的警示鍾，如果沒有人類保護大自然，恐怕以後連那雨過天晴的後的一絲感動也會一去不復返，至少我們會失去對生命的另一種詮釋
㈧ 英語作文點評
建議
Our school is preparing to hold (prepared被動不合來適自)
Festival will be held
It includes singing songs
There are...are your fans 此句有兩個謂語動詞，there be 和主系表結果沖突。可改為A number of students in our school are your fans.
We will feel pleased(pleasure 名詞放feel後不合適)