2010高考英語作文

『壹』 2010高考英語作文評分標准

2010高考英語高考作文評分標准
1. 本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。
2. 評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然後以該檔次 的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最後給分。
3. 詞數少於 80和多於 120的，從總分中減去2分。
4. 評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5. 拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影 響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。
6. 如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。
7. 內容要點可用不同方式表達，對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好)；(21-25分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 覆蓋所有內容要點。
3. 應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。
5. 有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好)：(16-20分)
1. 完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6. 達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)
1. 基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2. 雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3. 應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。
5. 應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。
6. 整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)
1. 未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2. 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5. 較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。
6. 信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差)：(1-5分)
1. 未完成試題規定的任務。
2. 明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3. 語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4. 較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。
5. 缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。
6. 信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分：（0分）
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息：內容太少，無法評判；寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。

2009年高考英語評分細則

第一檔是極優檔，30分。標准為：書寫規范；覆蓋所有要點，內容充實；詞彙豐富，有修辭意識。

第二檔是優秀，26分至29分。標准為：緊扣主題；覆蓋所有要點，內容充實；語法結構多樣，詞彙豐富，顯示出較強的語言運動能力；語言小錯不超過4個。

第三檔是良好，22 分至25分。標准為：緊扣主題，覆蓋所有要點，內容較充實，語言有少量錯誤，但基本不影響意思表達。

第四檔是一般，18分至21分。標准為：緊扣主題，基本覆蓋所有要點，能夠表達基本內容；語言錯誤已影響了部分意思的表達，但多數句子基本正確。

第五檔是較差，13分至17分。標准為：內容不完成，要點不全，行文不連貫，語言錯誤較多，多數句子基本正確。

第六檔是差，6分至12分。標准為：內容混亂或主要內容偏離主題，能夠寫出少數與內容相關的可讀句。

第七檔是極差，0分至5分。只能寫出與內容相關的詞語，沒有有效信息；抄寫其他文章或只寫出與作文無關的內容。

評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定是否達到及格線。根據百分制計算，英語作文的及格線是18分。

『貳』 2010高考英語作文

2010高考英語作文範文：國慶60周年
新中國成立60周年來，我國發生了翻天覆地的變化，請你據此寫一篇120字的英語作文，談談自己的感想。

要求:

1. 列出生活中反映一兩件家鄉變化的事, 如購新車、住新房等。

2. 列出最近發生的一兩件國家大事，如成功舉辦奧運、「神舟七號」 順利升空等。

3. 要表達出你的喜悅和自豪之情，並談談你的感想。

Great changes have taken place since our country was founded 60 years ago. In the past we lived in the small and old houses and now we move into new broad ones which are more than one hundred square meters. At the same time, many families have own their new cars.

Besides, our country hosted the 29th Olympic Games successfully in 2008 and we took the first place in winning gold medals. Another inspiring event was that the Shenzhou Ⅶ was sent into space smoothly, which shows our scientific research get great achievements.

We are very happy and proud of all these achievements. I am sure our country will become even stronger and richer. I love our motherland very much. Let』s work hard to make contribution to our country in the future.

2010高考英語作文範文：甲型流感
甲型流感：(1)
假如你是李華，你學校內有人得了豬流感，正在接受治療，你校學生非常害怕，請你寫一篇短文談談如何預防豬流感?
1. 平時外出戴口罩，少去人群集中的公共場所, 避免接觸病人等。
2. 勤洗手，保證充足睡眠，多鍛煉多運動等。
3. 詞數: 120字左右
4. 文章的開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。
參考詞彙: 豬流感swine flu; 口罩 face mask.
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it? ____________________________________________________
Swine flu has come to our School! However, there is no vaccine to protect its virus. How do we protect us from it?
We advise that you should wear face mask and avoid going to the crowded place when you go out. We remember not to be in close contact with the patients infected with swine flu. On the other hand, the best way to stay away from this virus is to wash your hands often, and make sure that you have enough sleep. At the same time, we should do more exercise so that we can build up our body.
We are sure that we must overcome the threat against swine flu as long as we take proper measures and insist on taking exercise every day.

甲型流感：(2)
不同人都有著不同的習慣，個人習慣直接關系著公共衛生。請根據下列要求，寫一篇120字的英語短文，開頭和結尾已經寫好，不計入總詞數。
1. 介紹有些人不同的好習慣和壞習慣。
2. 習慣與衛生的關系：習慣是衛生基礎; 不好的習慣，會導致一些傳染疾病傳播，如AIDS，SARS， H1N1流感等。
3. 你的看法……。
It is generally believed that different people have different habits. Some people are addicted to habits like drinking and smoking, while others pay special attention to healthy diet and never taste things like alcohol and cigarettes.
It goes without saying that there is close relationship between personal habits and public health. On the one hand, good habits serve as the necessary basis of public health, that is to say, without good habits, public health can』t be guaranteed. On the other hand, infectious disease is the natural result brought by dirty habits, like
AIDS, SARS, H1N1 flu and so on.
Personally, I think it is high time we placed emphasis on improving personal habits and public health. If we mind our manners and behave ourselves well, there must be a bright and encouraging future.

2010高考英語作文範文：上海世博會
2009年5月1日世博會志願者招募儀式正式啟動，志願者是辦好世博會的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志願者或做家教，教小孩子閱讀、算術，或打掃公園與街道，或到醫院或療養院幫忙。你願意做志願者嗎?請陳述理由寫一篇100字左右的短文。

I would like to be a volunteer in my spare time. My reasons are as follows:

First of all, it is a good virtue to help others, even in modern society. We all need others』 help in case we get into trouble. Secondly, we are able to better ourselves by helping others because we gain valuable experience and build up our confidence while serving others. What』s more, volunteering makes us feel better about ourselves, thus making our life more enjoyable. More importantly, we can make the world a better place to live in by volunteering to improve it.

In summary, volunteering can make a difference to our life, so I think it is very rewarding to be a volunteer.

2010高考英語作文範文：金融危機下大學生就業
當今我國大學生就業成功率很低，除了全球性的金融危機影響外，還有就是大學生對工作的選擇。有的人認為應該優先選擇自己喜歡的工作，而不是自己擅長的;另一部分人相反。你班學生就此事進行討論，請客觀地介紹情況並談談你的看法。
觀點 理由
一部分人 喜歡比擅長重要。 興趣是最好的老師，精通與擅長的可能性會大大增加等。
另一部分 擅長比喜歡重要。 擅長更容易成功，後天努力培養興趣。
你 …………
注意：1. 短文須包括所有要點, 可適度發揮。
2. 開頭已為你寫好, 但不計人總詞數。
3. 詞數:120左右。
Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?___________________________________________
Recently the students in our class have discussed the following topic: which is more important for college graates to choose jobs, being interested in it or being good at it?
Some agree that the love of job is very important because interest is the best teacher. People are often willing to do what they like doing. If you are not good at it in the beginning, you can work hard and graally improve your skills to make you good at it. Others hold their view that if you are good at it, you have more chances to achieve success very soon. While you work, you can do all you can to gain the interest in it little by little.
From my point of view, I think we should make full use of our strengths to change them each other regardless of the fact that you like it or you are good at it.

2010高考英語作文範文：「快樂女聲」 等選秀熱
2009年 「快樂女聲」 的火爆已無需渲染。你對此現象進行簡單的調查，結果如下: 有些人認為 「平民平等參與，有機會一夜成名等」。也有些人認為 「快女」 中還存在一些不盡人意的地方, 如 「浪費時間和精力，影響學習，產生一夜成名的不良志向 (bad ambition) 等」。請根據以上情況為 「無為論壇」 寫一篇報告並發表自己的觀點。
注意: 1. 包括以上全部要點可適當 發揮，使上下文連貫。
2. 詞數: 100-120。
3. 文章的格式和開頭已給出, 不計入總詞數。
To: Wuwei Forum
From : Li Hua
Date: June 20, 2009
Subject: Super Girl
Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing. We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently.
_________________________________________________.
To: Wuwei Forum
From : Li Hua
Date: June 20, 2009
Subject: Super Girl
Super Girl has already been very hot all over China since it started on May 7, 2009 in Beijing. We have had a survey about the phenomenon recently.
There are two sides of opinions of it. Some people say Super Girl is their favorite. They hold their view that Super Girl can offer a stage for ordinary people to take part in it equally and have the chance of becoming famous overnight. While others think that Super Girl makes the girls waste time and energy so that it can have some bad effects on their study. In addition, it can cause some teenagers to have bad ambition about becoming famous overnight.
From my point of view, it is wrong of young people to admire Super Girl too much, because they may mislead young people. I think to learn more and work hard is the real way to success.

2010高考英語作文範文：低碳經濟下的環境保護
低碳經濟下的環境保護(1)

「低碳經濟」是一個具有廣泛社會性的經濟前沿理念，最早是在2003年英國政府發布的能源白皮書《我們能源的未來：創建低碳經濟》正式提出的。低碳經濟包括低碳發展、低碳產業、低碳技術和低碳生活等經濟形態，是指在不影響經濟發展的前提下，通過技術創新和制度創新，降低能源和資源消耗，盡可能最大限度地減少溫室氣體和污染物的排放，實現減緩氣候變化的目標，促進人類的可持續發展。

Protection of Environment

1. 目前環保還存在著許多問題。

2. 為了保護環境，

3. 各國政府做了大量的工作。

4. 我的看法。

There are still many problems of environmental protection in recent years. One of the most serious problems is the serious pollution of air, water and soil. the polluted air does great harm to people』s health. The polluted water causes diseases and death. What is more, vegetation had been greatly reced with the rapid growth of modern cities.

To protect the environment, governments of many countries have done a lot. Legislative steps have been introced to control air pollution, to protect the forest and sea resources and to stop any environmental pollution. Therefore, governments are playing the most important role in the environmental protection today.

In my opinion, to protect environment, the government must take even more concrete measures. First, it should let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection through ecation. Second, much more efforts should be made to put the population planning policy into practice, because more people means more people means more pollution. Finally, those who destroy the environment intentionally should be severely punished. We should let them know that destroying environment means destroying mankind themselves.

低碳經濟下的環境保護(2)

根據題目《師父被熏暈過去了》的漫畫和下面要求寫一篇關於河水污染的感想。

1. 情況。2. 原因。3. 後果。4. 措施。

詞數 100~120。

One day Sun Wukong together with his master and brothers was walking across a river. Suddenly his master fell off the horse by the bad smell of river water. They found the water so dirty that they could hardly breathe.

A lot of factories along the river always poured their waste water and rubbish straight into the river which made the river water polluted. In this way most of the fish in the river were killed. If the river water all over the country is polluted like this, no living things will exist in the water. Now more and more people have come to realize how serious this problem is. Our government is doing her best to take measures to fight against pollution. We expect that the water in every river will be made cleaner and cleaner before long.

低碳經濟下的環境保護(3)
全世界的環境問題在變得越來越嚴重。請你根據漫畫內容和下面要求給China Daily寫一封信反映這一情況，並提出保護環境的建議。
注意：1.信的開頭與結尾已經給出，不計算在總詞數內。
2. 字數要求: 120左右。
人口膨脹population expansion;過度開發overdevelopment。
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
_________________________________________________________
Yours truly
Li Hua
Dear editor,
Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.
With the development of instry and agriculture, cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas. Because of population expansion and overdevelopment, resources has become less and less. Trees on the hills have been cut down, and waste water is being poured continuously into rivers. The whole ecological balance of the earth is changing. Massive destruction of environment has brought about negative effects and even poses a great threat to man』s existence.
We must face the situation that exists and take actions to solve our environmental problems. We hope that all these measures will be effective and bring back a healthful environment.
Yours truly
Li Hua

『叄』 2010上海高考英語作文範文

高考英語高考作文評分標准
1.
本題總分為25分，按5個檔次給分。
2.
評分時，先根據文章的內容和語言初步確定其所屬檔次，然後以該檔次
的要求來衡量，確定或調整檔次，最後給分。
3.
詞數少於
80和多於
120的，從總分中減去2分。
4.
評分時，應注意的主要內容為：內容要點、應用詞彙和語法結構的數量和准確性、上下文的連貫性及語言的得體性。
5.
拼寫與標點符號是語言准確性的一個方面，評分時，應視其對交際的影
響程度予以考慮。英、美拼寫漢詞彙用法均可接受。
6.
如書寫較差，以至影響交際，將分數降低一個檔次。
7.
內容要點可用不同方式表達，對緊扣主題的適當發揮不予扣分。
【各檔次的給分范圍和要求】
第五檔(很好)；(21-25分)
1.
完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2.
覆蓋所有內容要點。
3.
應用了較多的語法結構和詞彙。
4.
語法結構或詞彙方面有些許錯誤，但為盡力使用較復雜結構或較高級詞彙所致；具備較強的語言運用能力。
5.
有效地使用了語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6.
完全達到了預期的寫作目的。
第四檔(好)：(16-20分)
1.
完全完成了試題規定的任務。
2.
雖漏掉1、2個次重點，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3.
應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4.
語法結構或詞彙方面應用基本准確，些許錯誤主要是因嘗試較復雜語法結構或詞彙所致。
5.
應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文結構緊湊。
6.
達到了預期的寫作目的。
第三檔(適當)：(11-15分)
1.
基本完成了試題規定的任務。
2.
雖漏掉一些內容，但覆蓋所有主要內容。
3.
應用的語法結構和詞彙能滿足任務的要求。
4.
有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，但不影響理解。
5.
應用簡單的語句間的連接成分，使全文內容連貫。
6.
整體而言，基本達到了預期的寫作目的。
第二檔(較差)：(6-10分)
1.
未恰當完成試題規定的任務。
2.
漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要內容，寫了一些無關內容。
3.
語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4.
有一些語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響了對寫作內容的理解。
5.
較少使用語句間的連接成分，內容缺少連貫性。
6.
信息未能清楚地傳達給讀者。
第一檔(差)：(1-5分)
1.
未完成試題規定的任務。
2.
明顯遺漏主要內容，寫了一些無關內容，原因可能是未理解試題要求。
3.
語法結構單調、詞彙項目有限。
4.
較多語法結構或詞彙方面的錯誤，影響對寫作內容的理解。
5.
缺乏語句間的連接成分，內容不連貫。
6.
信息未能傳達給讀者。
不得分：（0分）
未能傳達給讀者仟何信息：內容太少，無法評判；寫的內容均與所要求內容無關或所寫內容無法看清。

『肆』 天津2010高考英語作文

Application letter
Dear all,
I would like to introce myself in brief as follows,
I'm a dedicated student and intersted in taking part in all kinds of activities especially asisstance activity.I hope that school teachers and headmaster could allow me to asisst poor district and attrbute myself.
Fistly, asisstance is a tranditional vitue in our country.we could become colser with each other.Secondly, the society will be humous of peace and I can get more actual practice in English.Not only helped to others ,but also practise myself.
There are my plan for asisstance:
It is realistic for them to get more substance asisstance,such as ,books,tapescrip,computer and so on.We can raise some money for them,solving thier daily life and learning.Then ,they could be get much energy to study at normal position.I hope you can allow me to take part in this activity and be assigned to asisst them.

『伍』 2010高考英語作文範文

天津卷
Good afternoon. Ladies and gentlemen.

Welcome to this year』s English speech competition. Taking part in English speech competition is a helpful way to learn English. While we fully prepare for the competition, we can improve our abilities of listening and speaking and develop a good habit of reading English. In the process of the competition, you should pay special attention to the following rules. First, you should finish your speech in five minutes. Second, you try your best to express yourself in English fluently. Finally, you should have a good English pronunciation.

I hope that the English speech competition will be a great success!

Thank you!

【思路分析】

這是一篇很實用的演講稿。旨在考查學生在實際生活中在某個具體場合下靈活使用英文來表達自己思想的能力。考查學生學以致用。本演講稿有三個寫作要點：1. 說明比賽的意義，如提高英語聽說能力，養成讀書的習慣等；2. 說明比賽的注意事項，如每人演講不超過5分鍾，語言流利，發音準確等；3. 預祝比賽圓滿成功。然後自由發揮寫出適當的結尾。

【較高級的結構和短語】form/develop a good habit of doing…; take part in; The first thing we can do is to make…; pay attention to 等。

希望你能滿意。

『陸』 北京2010高考英語作文

可以准備幾篇不同類型的，例如：

一類情景作文：

1、09年高考的外出環保類；
2、10年海淀區一模的圖表類說明文

二類開放性作文：

1、家庭與教育類（例：09年北京高考；10年東城二模）
2、成就與夢想類（例：10年西城二模）
3、優點與缺點類（例：10年海淀一模）

不同類的文章詞彙群以及句子會有點不同，不過開頭結尾分段等都相對固定，可以參考一下：）

加油哈~~~

『柒』 2010年高考英語作文類型

http://wenku..com/view/5f47cdd233d4b14e852468ca.html

『捌』 2010全國高考卷英語作文 範文

全國一卷的：http://shiti.e.sina.com.cn/paper/89/18/31889/account.php?p=12
全國二卷的：one possible version
Dear Peter,
I remember you told me you were interested in teaching in China. Our school now is looking for a native-speaker to teach some course to senior high students. If you come, you can choose three of the following four courses: Speaking, Writing, Britain Today and American Today, and teach of English learning experiences. Besides teaching, you will also work as an advisor to our students' English club our school's English newspaper.
Please tell me know if you are interested and if you have any other questions. I'd be more than happy to help.
Best,
Li Hua.

『玖』 2010年天津卷高考英語作文範文

從話題角度來看，和往年一樣，社會類和教育類仍然是主要考查話題分別佔到11次和6次，當然這里社會類的話題包括工作，生活，城市建設等，內容涉及多個層面，這也是數量偏多的一個原因；教育類包含學科教育, 教育方式, 家庭教育, 學校教育等一直是高頻話題，科技類和環境類上半年考頻正常,犯罪類和政府類考查偏少，各出現了一次。值得注意的是，新聞媒體考題一般出現在上半年，今年考頻加大，上半年出現了2次。

重點考題分析

Some people believe famous people』s support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems. While other think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (2019/04/13)

4月13日考的這道題是整個上半年構思難度極高的一道題目，也是一道老題，很多有望上6的考生都因為這道題的構思問題，變成5.5分。有些學生對題目的理解有一些偏差，題目的意思是：名人對國際援助組織的捐助使得人們關注到問題，然而另一些人認為名人使得問題不那麼重要。第一方面比較好理解，名人利用自身的影響力使得問題得到關注，比如塵肺病對於大眾來說不是很常見，是煤礦工人得的一種病，很多明星通過公益活動，讓更多的人關注到這部分需要幫助的群體。另一方面，淡化問題的原因是大眾或者粉絲只關注名人的行為而忽視問題本身，對問題沒有後續跟進，也就最終解決不了問題。

The increasing use of technology in the workplace has made it easier for young people to get work and hard for old people. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (2019/05/04)

這道題審題很容易跑偏, 很多同學把重心會放在科技讓年輕人簡單地獲得工作,或者錯誤理解成科技讓年輕人的工作簡單化,忽視了後半句hard for old people。題目中含有並列關系and，需要兩者都要提及，所以後面論證只證明對年輕人的好處是偏面的。

總而言之，上半年題目以老題重現居多，同學們還是要多刷機經，有可能就碰到自己寫過的題目，下半年大作文犯罪類，政府類考題可能會增加，可以增加這兩類話題的練習。另外，要注意審題常見的坑，乍一看不太懂的題目不妨多讀幾遍，不要貿然下筆。

『拾』 我要2000~2010年各地高考英語作文及範文

2010年陝西高考英語作文試題 英語作文（滿分30分）假定你是李華。你們學校和一所美國中學簽署了教師交流協議。在過去的一年裡，你們的英文老師是來自這所中學的Sue Wood。不久前她返回美國任教。請你根據寫作要點和要求給Sue寫封電子郵件。英語作文寫作要點：1.對她表達感謝之意; 2.介紹她離開後你自己及班裡發生的事情;3.希望了解她的近況。 要求：1.短文須寫在答題卡的指定區域。2.短文詞數不少於100（不含已寫好的部分）。3.內容充實，結構完整，語意連貫。4.書寫須清晰、工整。5.郵件中不能體現本人真實信息。Dear Sure,I』m Li Hua, one of your students in China. It』s almost a month since you left us. We all miss you and are very grateful for what you did for us.We are busy as usual. We had an English speech contest the other day. I won the first prize! This again reminds me of all your kind help. Do you still remember the trees we planted together on the hill behind the school? Yesterday, we went there and watered them. The tree you planted yourself is growing well, and the whole class decided to name it Sue Wood. Will you come back to see Sue Wood?How is everything with you lately? We hope to know more about you and your American students. Hope to keep in close touch.All the bestLi Hua 範文：As we all know ,the world develops more quicker than before. ,Many students use the mobile phone in the school .Now ,let me tell you the advantage and the disadvantage . Many parent thinks use the mobile phone is bad for students .It will must affect students's study.Most students will play the games in class .And they will send the information to their friends .That's too bad to them to study . But ,using the mobile phone also have good things to students ,They can call their friends when they are not in school .It will makes your friendship more close . And ,if your parents can't find you ,they can call you at once . In a word ,using the mobile phone have the good things and the bad things .The important is if you cancontral