英语作文检查
① 英语作文求检查
Where does music come from? Can we study it? Or maybe it is just a talent. No one knows where it comes from.
There is a story about a boy who doesn't have good grades. He isn't good at chinese or maths. He likes to sing together with other children, but he doesn't sing very well. When he looked for his first job, he was refused. He is a good boy, but he doesn't have any special talents.
One day, he finds a beautiful piano and finds out that he can play the piano. He says he will play it in the future. He has a dream to become a musician. He wants to do it.... So we can say that he didn't find music, but music found him.
When he grew up, he played the piano very well, he become a piano musician and made his dream come true. This story is very good as it tells us how to make our dreams come true. Dreams are useful as it allows you to do dificult things...
Everybody needs a dream. And if you work hard your dreams will come true.
② 如何检查英语作文
1
题目有问题,你的意思应该是一个问句。how
will
i
deal
with
my
english
problems?
2第一句,在problems后加about.
3第一段的最后一句时态错误,应该时态是前后一致,wrote改为write
.
4第二段第三句in改为
with。
总体上还是不错,意思表达的很清楚。只是需要注意一些细节问题,那样就更好咯!
③ 检查一下我的英语作文
Whyte's
vacatioN
plans
Hello,I'm
Xiao
Ming.I
have
a
friend
WHOSEname
is
Whyte.ThIS
vacation,he's
going
to
XiaMen.And
he's
GONGING
TO
stay
there
for
a
week.He
thinks
there
WILL
BE
beautiful,the
weather
WILL
BE
great
too.He
WILL
BE
TELL
me
about
Xia
Meng's
sea
AFTER
HE
COME
BACK.And
he's
going
to
swim
in
the
sea
and
eat
sometHing
delicious.He'll
have
a
relaxing
vacation.
既然是plans就不应该有过去式,he
thinks
XiaMeng's
people
is
friendly.也应该再回来以后再说嘛
上面大写的都是修改过来的,望参考!
④ 英语作文检查一下
没有这样的作文啊,只有论文检测也不是免费的。
⑤ 英语作文检查!!求高人解决
就是语法方面的检查吗?
Electricity is of vital significance to us human beings and here comes a question that how can we make the most of electricity. As we all know, electricity can help people do a lot of things, such as making our work more efficiently and saving time. Without electricity, i cannot even imagine what the earth will be like. Besides, we must come to realize that there are not enough electricity resources in the word and we should make efforts to save it.
Recently, scientists have found a kind of high efficient way to proce electricity , that is, by means of friction, which can proce a great power, while it cant be mass proced , Consequently,it is not widely applied to life. So, we still need to save electricity。
Measures can be taken in every detail, for instance, turning off the lights when not necessary, using other resources like solar energy to replace .In this way, the world will become more and more beautiful。
⑥ 英语作文检查
Dear friends from America.
Welcome to XXX school and join us in the English corner. I am XXX, and I am so honored to be your guide on behalf of XXXX school. The English corner is founded to imrpove students' English skills, and a lot of related activities are designed. Despite of the regular listening games, we also have speech and writting competitions. I hope you can join us and share with us. I will you all would have a nice stay here. Thank you.
原文有大幅修改。好好学习。
⑦ 检查一篇英语作文,谢谢!!!!
以下是我的修改,请楼主比照一下.因为写出具体原因太耗时耗力,敬请原谅.如有疑问,请给我发消息.
If I were Jane, would I leave Mr. Rochester?
I can’t understand why Jane left Mr. Rochester after she knew Mr. Rochester had a wife. And I think she was just refusing to enter the heaven.
So if I were Jane, I wouldn't leave Mr. Rochester.
Firstly, I believe that Mr. Rochester loves me, which is a very important reason for me not to leave him.
Next, I think that Mr. Rochester can deal with these things well, because he has so much ability.
Thirdly, if I left him, he would be lonely, very lonely. So I will live with him, and let the time prove that he really loves me .
Last, it's just a imagination that, if Jane didn’t leave Mr. Rochester, maybe the end of this story will be more perfect with less hurt and less pity.
⑧ 检查英语作文
I have been dreaming of being a doctor.
I had have a dream about being a doctor
I wan to live in Hangzhou.And my parents like there,too.
I want to live in Hangzhou where my parents both like .
I know that there are lots of famous places.I can visit there with my friends.
I know that there ara lots of famous places where I could visit with my friends.
I want to a big house
I want a big house.
I will very good
删了好了。。。
I will have many friends
I hope to have many fiends
my dream about the future
⑨ 英语作文 检查
reasons 用单数
whole summer time 去掉time
3. 第三行, but 用but also,前面用逗号
4, 倒数第五航, save 改成safe
5. 最后一段, why 后用陈述句语序。why she was always being strict with me.
6.最后一句 引号里用现在时即可。
⑩ 英语作文,语法检查
很多错误。。。。。把你要表达意思写出来,我给你写。