英語作文檢查
① 英語作文求檢查
Where does music come from? Can we study it? Or maybe it is just a talent. No one knows where it comes from.
There is a story about a boy who doesn't have good grades. He isn't good at chinese or maths. He likes to sing together with other children, but he doesn't sing very well. When he looked for his first job, he was refused. He is a good boy, but he doesn't have any special talents.
One day, he finds a beautiful piano and finds out that he can play the piano. He says he will play it in the future. He has a dream to become a musician. He wants to do it.... So we can say that he didn't find music, but music found him.
When he grew up, he played the piano very well, he become a piano musician and made his dream come true. This story is very good as it tells us how to make our dreams come true. Dreams are useful as it allows you to do dificult things...
Everybody needs a dream. And if you work hard your dreams will come true.
② 如何檢查英語作文
1
題目有問題,你的意思應該是一個問句。how
will
i
deal
with
my
english
problems?
2第一句,在problems後加about.
3第一段的最後一句時態錯誤,應該時態是前後一致,wrote改為write
.
4第二段第三句in改為
with。
總體上還是不錯,意思表達的很清楚。只是需要注意一些細節問題,那樣就更好咯!
③ 檢查一下我的英語作文
Whyte's
vacatioN
plans
Hello,I'm
Xiao
Ming.I
have
a
friend
WHOSEname
is
Whyte.ThIS
vacation,he's
going
to
XiaMen.And
he's
GONGING
TO
stay
there
for
a
week.He
thinks
there
WILL
BE
beautiful,the
weather
WILL
BE
great
too.He
WILL
BE
TELL
me
about
Xia
Meng's
sea
AFTER
HE
COME
BACK.And
he's
going
to
swim
in
the
sea
and
eat
sometHing
delicious.He'll
have
a
relaxing
vacation.
既然是plans就不應該有過去式,he
thinks
XiaMeng's
people
is
friendly.也應該再回來以後再說嘛
上面大寫的都是修改過來的,望參考!
④ 英語作文檢查一下
沒有這樣的作文啊,只有論文檢測也不是免費的。
⑤ 英語作文檢查!!求高人解決
就是語法方面的檢查嗎?
Electricity is of vital significance to us human beings and here comes a question that how can we make the most of electricity. As we all know, electricity can help people do a lot of things, such as making our work more efficiently and saving time. Without electricity, i cannot even imagine what the earth will be like. Besides, we must come to realize that there are not enough electricity resources in the word and we should make efforts to save it.
Recently, scientists have found a kind of high efficient way to proce electricity , that is, by means of friction, which can proce a great power, while it cant be mass proced , Consequently,it is not widely applied to life. So, we still need to save electricity。
Measures can be taken in every detail, for instance, turning off the lights when not necessary, using other resources like solar energy to replace .In this way, the world will become more and more beautiful。
⑥ 英語作文檢查
Dear friends from America.
Welcome to XXX school and join us in the English corner. I am XXX, and I am so honored to be your guide on behalf of XXXX school. The English corner is founded to imrpove students' English skills, and a lot of related activities are designed. Despite of the regular listening games, we also have speech and writting competitions. I hope you can join us and share with us. I will you all would have a nice stay here. Thank you.
原文有大幅修改。好好學習。
⑦ 檢查一篇英語作文,謝謝!!!!
以下是我的修改,請樓主比照一下.因為寫出具體原因太耗時耗力,敬請原諒.如有疑問,請給我發消息.
If I were Jane, would I leave Mr. Rochester?
I can』t understand why Jane left Mr. Rochester after she knew Mr. Rochester had a wife. And I think she was just refusing to enter the heaven.
So if I were Jane, I wouldn't leave Mr. Rochester.
Firstly, I believe that Mr. Rochester loves me, which is a very important reason for me not to leave him.
Next, I think that Mr. Rochester can deal with these things well, because he has so much ability.
Thirdly, if I left him, he would be lonely, very lonely. So I will live with him, and let the time prove that he really loves me .
Last, it's just a imagination that, if Jane didn』t leave Mr. Rochester, maybe the end of this story will be more perfect with less hurt and less pity.
⑧ 檢查英語作文
I have been dreaming of being a doctor.
I had have a dream about being a doctor
I wan to live in Hangzhou.And my parents like there,too.
I want to live in Hangzhou where my parents both like .
I know that there are lots of famous places.I can visit there with my friends.
I know that there ara lots of famous places where I could visit with my friends.
I want to a big house
I want a big house.
I will very good
刪了好了。。。
I will have many friends
I hope to have many fiends
my dream about the future
⑨ 英語作文 檢查
reasons 用單數
whole summer time 去掉time
3. 第三行, but 用but also,前面用逗號
4, 倒數第五航, save 改成safe
5. 最後一段, why 後用陳述句語序。why she was always being strict with me.
6.最後一句 引號里用現在時即可。
⑩ 英語作文,語法檢查
很多錯誤。。。。。把你要表達意思寫出來,我給你寫。